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anna_chan714

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Jan 18, 2009 16:48

Title: The Arrangement ( Read more... )

het, ruki, jrock

Comments 7

fffriction1984 January 19 2009, 02:16:45 UTC

drama is good. I love drama. ^^

but it's rather short, isn't it? there isn't much space for imagination, I think T.T

anna_chan714 January 19 2009, 02:21:40 UTC

yess drama is goood :]

it is kinda short... but on paper its like 11 pages.

really ? hah i pre-wrote this and the people who read it said it was good.

well extra criticism is good. thanks for reading. :D

tbsupervillains January 19 2009, 02:24:08 UTC

Oh, it is good, but I'm just used to read loooooooooong loooooooooooooooooong stories with looooooooooooooooooong chapters and so are my own stories XD

But I'll stick to it ^^

tbsupervillains January 19 2009, 02:24:43 UTC

yaaaaaah, wrong log-in, sorry. I'm the same person as fffriction1984 XD

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yellow_shuffle January 19 2009, 03:17:13 UTC

omg!..

sorry but can i criticize a bit?.. okay so here it is..

they're moving alittle way to fast don't you think, anna chan?

well.. it'd your story so... keep it as you like it..

i was just a bit culture-shocked about the kiss thingy.. lol

but i still love it!..\

please continue!

anna_chan714 January 19 2009, 03:19:18 UTC

its fine, i need the criticism :]

well yea they were arranged to get married so the kiss is like a test sorta thing.