Oh God, I'm only half-way through and already I'm COMPLETELY BESOTTED with your Arthur and Merlin. THIS is what I've been in need of for Ages--- Ages I tell you. Flirting, banter, great dialogue, lots and lots of UST and super characterization!!! Really, You're AWESOME. I'm having a blast reading this, and I constantly have to tamp down on the Squeal-factor so my roommate doesn't barge in all suspicious 'n all... The supporting cast is really solid and I love that they take just the right amount of space but not too much, so that instead the focus is on The Big Gay Romance of M/A and their developing feelings. YESYESYESYES!!!! Christ, you're good. THANKS :-)
This is fantastic. You built unbelievable sexual tension between Arthur and Merlin and I love how obvious it was to everyone but Merlin that Arthur was reciprocating his huge crush. How could Merlin be completely oblivious to Arthur following him about and insisting on his company and continuously pestering him? Even Will could see it, and he saw them interact for less than a minute!
Copious amounts of alcohol finally brought things to a head and the frantic kissing and sex were erotic. I'm just worried about morning after regrets. Arthur was wasted, will he even remember what happened in the morning? It's very entertaining.
I love the scene where Arthur comes in for treatment on his knee, and Arthur starts to see Merlin open up, even if it's in the context of treatment. Do love how all the friends can see what's going on, and Morgana's pronouncement that they should shag already, the foreplay is getting tiresome!
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Really, You're AWESOME. I'm having a blast reading this, and I constantly have to tamp down on the Squeal-factor so my roommate doesn't barge in all suspicious 'n all...
The supporting cast is really solid and I love that they take just the right amount of space but not too much, so that instead the focus is on The Big Gay Romance of M/A and their developing feelings. YESYESYESYES!!!! Christ, you're good. THANKS :-)
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I did think backwards, I think, in replying to the other comment first. But this comment is awesome too, and deserves its own reply!
*draws hearts around it*
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And THIS:
“I am telling you, if we were dogs-“
“Please don’t even finish that sentence.”
Made me laugh out loud!!!
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Thank you!
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Copious amounts of alcohol finally brought things to a head and the frantic kissing and sex were erotic. I'm just worried about morning after regrets. Arthur was wasted, will he even remember what happened in the morning? It's very entertaining.
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