Comments | annabirmingham: If I had you (February Challenge)

annabirmingham

If I had you (February Challenge)

Feb 13, 2011 14:46

Summary - Oneshot from the Four-Two Offense universe. A few thoughts from evil!Ennis :)

Modern day AU/AU. Ennis and Jack met on the varsity volleyball team at high school. It was hate at first sight, or so it may seem...

Warnings - none
Length - 450 words

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ifihadyou, oneshot

Comments 42

zeltia February 13 2011, 20:18:41 UTC

Gorgeous!!! I love these boys and I miss them a lot.

Thank you so much, Anna.

annabirmingham February 14 2011, 22:54:32 UTC

Thanks! Glad you liked it
Anna x

carmenmariabs February 13 2011, 20:23:07 UTC

Suffering and illusion.
He who loves suffer alone, but feel and imagine ...
And yes ?....
That is their world.
Nice and tender
Carmen
Thank you very much.

annabirmingham February 14 2011, 22:55:16 UTC

Thanks Carmen - yes I do think Ennis was suffering all on his own. Fortunately not for long though :)
Anna x

trekfan February 13 2011, 20:38:45 UTC

so sweet, how he feels, he wants him but doesn't know how to get him.

I loved your Four Two Offense Anna <3 universe

annabirmingham February 14 2011, 22:59:05 UTC

Thanks Linda! I did feel for Ennis in the early days - glad he got his man in the end!
Anna x

roby100 February 13 2011, 20:39:45 UTC

You know how much I love the FTO boys so you can guess my feelings when I saw this!
OMG, it's a summary of what happened before their first kiss, it's perfect.
Thank you, thank you, thank you!
A big hug
Roby

annabirmingham February 14 2011, 23:00:20 UTC

Thanks Roby, so pleased you liked this - it means a lot to me! And yes, I tried to put in the key things that happened before they got together :)
Hugs back
Anna x

eandj February 13 2011, 21:00:22 UTC

(((Anna)))
the FTO boys are back!!!!
thanks so much
I love it
Paula

annabirmingham February 14 2011, 23:00:47 UTC

Thanks Paula - glad you enjoyed it!
Anna x