Friday at the sandbox - Part 4 "blood, sweat and tears"

Jul 06, 2011 14:37

Part 4 of the ongoing one-shot...

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground, coffee and donuts...

Warnings - a little blood in this one. Nothing serious, so hopefully not too squicky!
Length - c400 words
Feedback - yes please!

Jack has just introduced himself to the father of the little blonde girl...

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fridayatthesandbox

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rouxb July 7 2011, 04:01:13 UTC
I will never complain about a good never-ending one shot!
Juno and what's his name-I like them. Over the holiday my 3 year old nephew and I named two of his model cars Ennis and Jack (okay, I named them Ennis and Jack). He could remember Ennis-probably because it was his favorite car-but poor Jack was just another "what's his name again?"

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bowl_of_glow July 7 2011, 04:26:42 UTC
I let out my breath. “Oh. Ok.” My son. Memory like a goldfish.

Ahah! Oh, Jack, you see the man will tell you his name in no time :)

I love these drabbles, they leave me feeling good. It's like eating a piece of chocolate - they don't last long but they're so sweet! (...hmmm. Chocolate).

I guess I've missed Jack and Ennis, I haven't read any BBM fanfic in a while. I can venture out of this fandom, but Jack and Ennis will always remain my OTP ♥

Thanks for sharing!

B.

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rimasworld July 7 2011, 04:40:46 UTC
Juno - I like it. Cute name for Bobby to call Junior. Jack looking back at Ennis in the rear-view mirror, very cannon like.

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tizi17 July 7 2011, 06:27:56 UTC
that is so sweet and fun.... thank you!

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lara_pinta July 7 2011, 08:52:17 UTC
You are doing a great job with this series, it is so engaging.

I loved "Yes, cake for him this time too. Yes, a chocolate donut. With sprinkles."

Thank you
Lorna

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