Friday at the sandbox - Part 5 "better late than never"

Jul 12, 2011 21:17

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground, coffee and donuts...

Warnings - none
Length - c400 words
Feedback - yes please!

A/N - so sorry for not replying to comments last week. Time kind of ran away with me. Your comments mean so much to me and I appreciate each and every one. I'll try to do better this week :)

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annabirmingham July 13 2011, 09:44:42 UTC
Thanks PJ :)
Anna x

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connecting joetheone July 13 2011, 02:14:14 UTC
How wonderful that he showed up and realized that Jack actually bought a coffee for him and that he brought cookies and then the connecting of hands. Joe

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Re: connecting annabirmingham July 13 2011, 12:49:07 UTC
Thanks Joe! I think the first time that the boys touch is very important :)
Anna x

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sjmarv July 13 2011, 02:15:44 UTC
OMG you are having such fun with this, aren't you?

“How’s the hand?”

It takes me a second to realise he is talking about Bobby.

LOL!! Bet Jack'd just love to show Ennis what he can do with his hand!

Susan

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annabirmingham July 13 2011, 12:49:44 UTC
Thanks Susan! Oh yes, I'm having fun with this! If I'm not having fun then I wouldn't be writing it :)
Anna x

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gwylliondream July 13 2011, 02:16:47 UTC
This is so sweet and lovely. Hee hee- I like the momentary confusion when Ennis asked, "How's the hand."

Just delicious!

XO
Donna

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annabirmingham July 13 2011, 12:50:05 UTC
Thanks Donna! Glad you are liking it
Anna x

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bbmgirlfan July 13 2011, 02:52:09 UTC
Nice! :)

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annabirmingham July 13 2011, 12:50:23 UTC
thanks!
Anna x

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