Friday at the sandbox - Part 5 "better late than never"

Jul 12, 2011 21:17

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground, coffee and donuts...

Warnings - none
Length - c400 words
Feedback - yes please!

A/N - so sorry for not replying to comments last week. Time kind of ran away with me. Your comments mean so much to me and I appreciate each and every one. I'll try to do better this week :)

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Comments 37

annabuffy July 13 2011, 10:43:33 UTC
They are both adorable. Their second date is off to a great start.

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annabirmingham July 13 2011, 12:54:13 UTC
Thanks Anna - glad you are liking it!
Anna x

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lightning070 July 13 2011, 10:44:43 UTC
This is just so cute, adorable and sweet! Love it.
I think it was nice that Ennis brought cookies! I also loved the line where their hands touched. :D
Kudos!

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annabirmingham July 13 2011, 12:55:01 UTC
I think Ennis could win anyone over with cookies!
Thanks so much :)
Anna x

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eandj July 13 2011, 12:33:33 UTC
uhuu
love it
it's like I'm right there with them
thanks
Paula

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annabirmingham July 13 2011, 12:55:43 UTC
Thanks Paula - I feel I'm there too! I picture the playground I am basing it in all the time!!
Anna x

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trekfan July 13 2011, 14:36:30 UTC
CUTE do they meet everyday? I mean doesn't Ennis and Jack have jobs?

Did Jack tell Ennis his name? I can't remember

I love this series

more please

Hugs
Linda

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annabirmingham July 13 2011, 15:41:18 UTC
Thanks Linda! No, they meet once a week. On a Friday. And yes, they have jobs :)
Jack introduced himself at the end of part 3 - just before Bobby hurt himself.
More soon!
Anna x

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Great update zhouhua00 July 13 2011, 15:30:05 UTC
Ah ah Anna! I am so happy to see an update!

I really enjoy the tantalizing converstaion between our boys. It's delicious!

...“How’s the hand?”

It takes me a second to realise he is talking about Bobby...

Oh Jack you are thinking about dirty thoughts, aren't you? You'd better keep them off when kids are around! LOL!

Hua

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Re: Great update annabirmingham July 13 2011, 15:50:25 UTC
Thanks Hua! I do like writing the conversations between these two - it's good fun! And yes, Jack's head is full of dirty thoughts... haha!
Anna x

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