Friday at the sandbox - Part 7 "McDate"

[annabirmingham]

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground, coffee and donuts...

Warnings - none
Length - c400 words
Feedback - yes please!

Jack persuades Ennis to join him for lunch...

Comments

[annabirmingham]

Yep, adult date 'sort of' planned. In Jack's mind anyway - and who knows what Ennis thinks...
And yes, more soon!
Anna s

[trekfan]

Aw I love the McD's scene. and how their knees were touching and how they are making plans to see each other without the kids around :D

more please

Hugs

[annabirmingham]

Thanks Linda. I guess they can't be too obviously when the kids are about, so subtlety is the key :)
More soon!
Anna x

[changeineed]

Just perfect! I love the way Jack is thinking about Bobby as "my boy".. So much tenderness and pride in these two words...

PS: I was so pissed that LJ was down I couldn't read McDate!

[annabirmingham]

Oh LJ LJ... it always goes down at the most inappropriate times... I got this part posted but then couldn't get on to reply to you guys - the ones who had managed to actually read in the first place that is!!
Glad you liked it :)
Anna x

[lightning070]

He smiles back. “He’s a handful isn’t he?”

My mind hits the gutter as I immediately imagine a different kind of handful. I clear my throat and nod. “Oh yeah.”
Naughty Jack. :P But lovable. :D

Aww Jack's so love struck. :D

Once again Bobby cuts the "date" short. ;) Will be fun to read about them
taking a beer together.

I just love this series. :) Great read!

[annabirmingham]

Oh yeah Jack is totally smitten!! Poor old Ennis doesn't stand a chance really...
Bobby is a pain isn't he? But very cute with it so I can't be too mad at him!
Anna x

[annabuffy]

Loved the McDate. The boys were just adorable with the legs brushing and the flirting. Bobby may have ended the date to soon, but good for Jack for already setting up the next "date". Looking forward to their Bud Night. :)

[annabirmingham]

Oh how do you do it??? "Bud Night" is another great title for a future chapter - I guess I'm going to have to start paying you soon, huh?! :)
Anna x