Friday at the sandbox - Part 7 "McDate"

Jul 24, 2011 21:13

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground, coffee and donuts...

Warnings - none
Length - c400 words
Feedback - yes please!

Jack persuades Ennis to join him for lunch...

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Friday at the sandbox argentine65 August 2 2011, 11:46:27 UTC
When two grown up people are surrounded by children in this case or by some other people is very difficult to start a relation, you need some time to talk and to learn the other person is. You only have clues that can be true or not. But I love this story and how you are writing it. Thank you so much. Martha

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Re: Friday at the sandbox annabirmingham August 4 2011, 02:22:36 UTC
Thanks Martha. Yes, it must be difficult to even consider a new relationship when you have kids, as your time is rarely your own. The boys will get some time alone, I promise, but it may take a little while!
Anna x

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lara_pinta August 5 2011, 22:34:28 UTC
This scene is perfecty executed.

Thank you
Lorna

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