Friday at the sandbox - Part 8 "Rain stops play"

[annabirmingham]

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground...

Warnings - none
Length - c400 words
Feedback - yes please!

The guys discussed an 'adult' date during the 'McDate'...

Comments

[gwylliondream]

Oh, the rain just breaks my heart!

Hang it there, Jack. If you two want to see each other again, I know you'll make it happen.

XO
Donna

[annabirmingham]

Too right he'll make it happen! The rain can only keep Jack down for so long :)
Anna x

[sjmarv]

Love this little story. You pack a great deal into these little snippets. I like to imagine that Ennis was leaning his window on Friday, sulking just like Jack.

Susan

[annabirmingham]

Thanks Susan! I think Ennis was most likely thinking the exact same thoughts as Jack last week.
Anna x

frustration

[joetheone]

Yep i know that feeling no matter how well we are connected these days the wait for the one you truly want to text, call, or post to your facebook page is so daunting. Good chapter. Joe

Re: frustration

[annabirmingham]

Thanks Joe. I don't think the feeling ever gets any easier, no matter how much technology we have today. You can't control the butterflies and anticipation :)
Anna x

[sienata]

awwww, how sad! poor jack. i bet ennis is just as bummed. hopefully fate will give them a hand. next week is a long time off!

[annabirmingham]

Yes I did feel sorry for Jack when I wrote this, but then he never gets an easy ride, does he? Patience will be reward though, Jack!
Anna x

[trekfan]

darn the weather! He should have gotten Ennis' phone number. I hope they cross paths soon.

great story Anna

xxxx

[annabirmingham]

You just know that Jack is kicking himself after letting Ennis leave like that! They'll meet again soon though.
Anna x