Friday at the sandbox - Part 8 "Rain stops play"

[annabirmingham]

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground...

Warnings - none
Length - c400 words
Feedback - yes please!

The guys discussed an 'adult' date during the 'McDate'...

Comments

[annabirmingham]

Thanks Tracy - yep it is!!
Anna x

[zeltia]

This is so sweet, and your Jack and little Bobby are totally adorable. I love this story so much.

Thank you!!!

[annabirmingham]

Thanks so much Zeltia! So pleased you are enjoying it :)
Anna x

[lightning070]

Poor Jack. He's head over heels in love with Ennis. Too bad it started to rain so they couldn't meet again. :( I hope they'll meet again before Jack succumbs to the anticipation!
I really like these short stories. :) Loved the tittle! Rain stops play both for the young kids and the older ones. ;)

[annabirmingham]

Thanks so much! Jack is totally hooked isn't he? A bit of anticipation won't kill him, but it will sure make the time drag until he sees Ennis again :)
Anna x

[rouxb]

Such a rainy, melancholy chapter! Jack has fallen hard it seems.

[annabirmingham]

Yes he's fallen hard. Not one to do anything by half is our Jack :)
Anna x

[sliveredmoon]

Ohhh, Jack's crushin' big time!
After reading this, all I can say is, "Crap!"

Maybe Ennis went to the MacDonald's looking for him ?

[annabirmingham]

Ohhh, Jack's crushin' big time!

Heh, I love that!! He sure is...
Anna x