Friday at the sandbox - Part 10 "Bud Night"

Aug 17, 2011 20:33

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground...

Warnings - none
Length - c450 words
Feedback - yes please!

Thanks to annabuffy for another chapter title :)

Ennis asks Jack out on an 'adult' date...

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annabirmingham August 19 2011, 01:16:21 UTC
Good, good, good!!
Anna x

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juliathecat August 18 2011, 07:09:36 UTC
You're killing me!

:-)

Wonderful, can't wait for more!

Thanks
Jules

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annabirmingham August 19 2011, 01:16:45 UTC
Thanks Jules! More will be coming soon :)
Anna x

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emmiska August 18 2011, 08:36:14 UTC
I hope there's more where this came from! Thanks for another well-written chapter.

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annabirmingham August 19 2011, 01:17:15 UTC
Oh yes there is more, I can assure you! So glad you liked this one.
Anna x

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roby100 August 18 2011, 09:19:14 UTC
Awww, a new chapter!
A bear, football and electricity between them: I loved it!
And the night is not over yet..... :)
Thanks for the update.
A big hug
Roby

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annabirmingham August 19 2011, 01:18:30 UTC
Thanks Roby. And no, the night is not quite over yet :)
Anna x

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lara_pinta August 18 2011, 10:19:07 UTC
You are building up the tension very nicely.

I can hardly wait though for Ennis, as you hint at here, to rev into 'action'.

Thank you
Lorna

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annabirmingham August 19 2011, 01:21:04 UTC
Thanks Lorna! I love a bit of tension so I always try to include some wherever I can :)
Anna x

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