Friday at the sandbox - Part 10 "Bud Night"

[annabirmingham]

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground...

Warnings - none
Length - c450 words
Feedback - yes please!

Thanks to annabuffy for another chapter title :)

Ennis asks Jack out on an 'adult' date...

Comments

[sjmarv]

Enjoying like everyone else.

Susan

[annabirmingham]

Thanks Susan - so glad you are enjoying it!
Anna x

[lightning070]

This is so good. :) In the last line I can't agree more with Jack. :)
Two friends taking a beer. It reminds me of a scene from the movie. I'm not sure if it's a cut scene though.

Looking forward to the next part. :)

[annabirmingham]

Thanks! I guess I did try to channel the movie a bit, when the boys have their first 'drink together' at the bar, before heading up the mountain. Men drinking beer together can be kind of sexy I think...
Anna x

[lightning070]

It's good to channel the movie I think. It gives the story character and a connection to the original movie/novel. :)

[ramona4jake]

I hope for a good night kiss too.... at least ! ;o) And I'm right there with Donna: I need a beer !

thank you, love it !

[annabirmingham]

Thanks! Seems like I might have to open a bar to serve cold beers to all you folks!!
More action soon...
Anna x

[bbmgirlfan]

Awesome! I'm glad it's going so well, so far. Loved the brush of the knee!

Looking forward to the next one.

Jeanine

[grlewis]

"There is so much being unsaid. The signs are subtle, but they are definitely there."

i like this sentence. it says so much in a subtle manner.