Friday at the sandbox - Part 11 "Night Cap"

Aug 24, 2011 22:21

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground...

Warnings - none
Length - c450 words
Feedback - yes please!

The guys are out on an adult only 'beer date'...

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bbmgirlfan August 25 2011, 04:56:12 UTC
Now that's the way to end a beer date! :)

Love it that they are both clear now about what they want.

Jeanine

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annabirmingham August 26 2011, 00:55:43 UTC
Definitely the best way to end any date! There's certainly no hiding behind the kids now :)
Anna x

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aileenfan August 25 2011, 05:27:15 UTC
Yay, they kissed:DDD What a lovely scene:)))

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annabirmingham August 26 2011, 00:56:07 UTC
Thanks - it was good to finally get them there!
Anna x

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zeltia August 25 2011, 08:14:41 UTC
Whoa there!!! That was sooo sexy, and the last few lines were amazingly intense. I can not breathe. Lol!!! Moooaaarrr, please.
Oh and I love that they kissed in a playground cause they met in one.

Thank you so much.

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annabirmingham August 26 2011, 00:56:56 UTC
Thanks :) I'm glad that is came over as hot as I re-read it so many times it kind of lost impact on me!!
More soon!
Anna x

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roby100 August 25 2011, 08:36:48 UTC
This is perfect.
Jack starting slowly, sweet and then waiting... Luckily his waiting was very short and his reward was the best ever.
I loved how it went, very well done!

Thanks for the update.
A big hug
Roby

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annabirmingham August 26 2011, 00:57:44 UTC
Thanks Roby - I think the wait was well worth it for Jack - his persistence and courage paid off big time!!
Anna x

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bowl_of_glow August 25 2011, 11:27:12 UTC
Yay! Yay!

YAY!

YAAAY!!

They kissed! :)

(Once outside I push my hands deep into my pockets. I don’t trust myself to not just grab at him.

Jack is the cutest thing EVER. ♥)

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annabirmingham August 26 2011, 01:01:05 UTC
They sure did kiss :))
Thanks so much for reading - I love the enthusiasm!!
Anna x

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