Friday at the sandbox - Part 12 "A shot in the dark

[annabirmingham]

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground...

Warnings - none
Length - c400 words
Feedback - yes please!

The 'beer date' took an intimate turn when Jack took the plunge...

Comments

[lara_pinta]

Anna

You had Ennis acting just how most of us have been wanting and of course we can hardly wait until Friday.

Finding your story to be a delightful read.
Lorna

[annabirmingham]

Thanks Lorna,
I always see Ennis as one to bottle it all in and then explode into action when the time is right. I love it when he lets his passion consume him - so sexy!!
More soon!
Anna x

[zeltia]

LOVE IT!!!

Very sexy and passionate. And at the end our boys were adorable, acting like shy kids.

I truly love this story.

Thank you so much.

[annabirmingham]

Thank *you* so much for reading it! I like that you find it sexy and passionate - it's always tricky when you have read it so many times before posting. Glad it worked for you :)
Anna x

[annabuffy]

The boys finally start to get to know each other and they had to stop. To bad. But looking forward to their date on Friday. Maybe after lunch they can play hide and seek inside Jack's apartment together. ;p

[annabirmingham]

Heheh - yeah a nice game of hide and seek when the adults hide in a darkened room and the kids can't find them anywhere :D Maybe they'll postpone the *games* until the next adult date. it is coming...
Anna x

[gwylliondream]

Oh, Jeez! How did I miss this yesterday?

Hot, hot, hot!

LOL about the siren!

XO
Donna

[annabirmingham]

I know, shame on you Donna!! :D
Better late than never they say...
Anna x

[lightning070]

That was a bit funny. :) Their passion really got the better of them. :P
The "it's not that simple" comment made me think of the original story. :( I hope it'll work better for them this time around. It's true that there are other people to consider.

Great story! I can't wait for the next entry. :D

[annabirmingham]

Oh I'm all about the happy ending so the guys will definitely find a way to make it work!
Thanks for commenting :)
Anna x