Comments | annabirmingham: Friday at the sandbox - Part 13 "Calm before the storm"

annabirmingham

Friday at the sandbox - Part 13 "Calm before the storm"

Sep 04, 2011 15:01

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground...

Warnings - none
Length - c400 words
Feedback - yes please!

The boys utilised a dark playground before reality set in...

( clickety click )

fridayatthesandbox

Comments 51

sienata September 4 2011, 20:11:27 UTC

oh yayayayayay!!! i am as excited about sunday coming up as they are. i wonder why ennis has to get an early start on monday? is it just his regular thing or something special?

you always make me want more. thanks so much!! :)

annabirmingham September 5 2011, 01:23:46 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm pretty excited about Sunday too. Ennis works on construction sites, so who knows what he is up to on Monday morning - or perhaps it was just a ruse to get Jack over to his place???
Anna x

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annabirmingham September 5 2011, 01:25:24 UTC

Thanks Ursel, so pleased you like it :)
Anna x

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annabirmingham September 5 2011, 01:26:53 UTC

Thanks Tina! I've never written a fic with the kids in before, so it's a new one for me. Bobby is growing on me hugely in this one though, and I like how he keeps putting his foot in it and making things awkward (or easier, depending on your point of view) for Jack!
Anna x

sliveredmoon September 4 2011, 22:26:09 UTC

Bless his heart! Bobby cuts to the chase! : ) Love the little details, Jack's fingers "playing with a seam on the inner thigh of my jeans" (he knew exactly what he was doing, yes?) because:

"Ennis is watching my fingers, his own flexing inside his jacket pockets." Poor Ennis. Patience! Hope Sunday night starts early, or the two guys are going into orbit! LOL!

annabirmingham September 5 2011, 01:28:05 UTC

Oh yeah, Jack knew what he was doing. He's the evil master of seduction, mwah hah hah....
Sunday will come around eventually, I promise :)
Anna x

Great update zhouhua00 September 5 2011, 01:32:30 UTC

I was giggling when I read Bobby saying “My dad likes you.”

Oh my boy, even he notices. But I am sure he had no idea how much his dad likes Ennis...

Can't wait for their date on Sunday night...at Ennis' place...can't find a better place for things to happen, can we?

I could already see our boys ripping off their clothes on Sunday night...can't wait for that!

Hua

Re: Great update annabirmingham September 5 2011, 02:09:54 UTC

I think Bobby notices more than he lets on - but you're right in that he has no idea *how much* his dad likes Ennis! It's definitely a clothes-ripping-off like :)
Anna x