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annabirmingham

Friday at the sandbox - Part 14 "Fireworks"

Sep 09, 2011 20:16

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground...

Warnings - none
Length - c450 words
Feedback - yes please!

Ennis invited Jack over to his place...

( clickety click )

fridayatthesandbox

Comments 46

grlewis September 10 2011, 02:00:20 UTC

yum. tasty chapter.....lol

annabirmingham September 10 2011, 18:01:07 UTC

Thanks very much, glad you enjoyed :)
Anna x

sienata September 10 2011, 02:37:49 UTC

mmmm very nice. i love e's feet!!! so i can see how that would get the evening off to a crazyhot start! thanks for this. i'm glad they're having a good time. :)

annabirmingham September 10 2011, 18:02:31 UTC

I liked the thought of both boys skimping on underwear - Ennis had no socks and Jack had no underpants. Too many clothes make getting naked a real struggle, obviously!!
Thanks :)
Anna x

bbmgirlfan September 10 2011, 02:49:02 UTC

Holy crap, that was hot!! Whew!

Okay, what happens after that? :)

Jeanine

annabirmingham September 10 2011, 18:02:58 UTC

Thanks Jeanine!
As to what happens next? You'll find out in a couple of days :)
Anna x

bbmgirlfan September 10 2011, 20:40:04 UTC

Just so you know, I read your reply in my email, remembered the chapter, and decided to go read it again!

rouxb September 10 2011, 02:59:12 UTC

so much hot in so few words-holy moe!

annabirmingham September 10 2011, 18:03:12 UTC

Thanks Roux :)
Anna x

warm beer joetheone September 10 2011, 03:30:34 UTC

Okay well I guess we can enjoy a beer together later this was much more fun. Joe

Re: warm beer annabirmingham September 10 2011, 18:04:26 UTC

Trust you to think about the warm beer, Joe!! I think it's fair to say they had much more *pressing* things on their minds than refrigeration of said beverage :)
Anna x