Friday at the sandbox - Part 14 "Fireworks"

[annabirmingham]

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground...

Warnings - none
Length - c450 words
Feedback - yes please!

Ennis invited Jack over to his place...

Comments

[george66]

Of course Jack has a Ennis fetish. It's only natural and it's pretty obvious Ennis feels the same about Jack.

I could tell...Jack was very late for dinner. The way Ennis attack and devoured him, the man was starving! LOL.

As always Anna...an enjoyable read!

george

[annabirmingham]

Thanks George! Yes, poor old Ennis was starving for a taste of Jack. I think he will say it was worth the wait, but I'm not sure he'd quite full just yet...
Anna x

[roby100]

Beautiful and perfect. Every line is a masterpiece. They both are hungry but not sure if it's about food!
Very well written.
Thanks so much.
A big hug
Roby

[annabirmingham]

Thanks so much, Roby :)
Oh they are definitely hungry boys, and something tells me that their appetite hasn't been satisfied yet!!
Anna x

[annabirmingham]

Thanks Tracy. Shower time? Hmm, not sure just yet (for the boys at least). I get the feeling that they are not done with each other by a long shot!
Anna x

[annabuffy]

Finally they attack each other! Don't know how they held off for so long. This date promises to be a long, hot one. ;)

[annabirmingham]

Thanks Anna! I know, the tension did build up a bit didn't it? The date certainly continues in the next chapter - maybe two :)
Anna x

[lightning070]

I just love a needy Ennis! They have been wanting it for so long! I can understand Jack being unable to... control himself. ;)
A wonderful and hot little story! Kudos!:D

[annabirmingham]

Thanks :)
I like a needy Ennis too - and an out of control Jack. Mmm. Makes for a nice combination!
Anna x