Friday at the sandbox - Part 16 "Heaven is a half pint"

[annabirmingham]

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground...

Warnings - none
Length - c400 words
Feedback - yes please!

Ennis agrees to a little intimate 'probing'...

Comments

[zeltia]

Precious!!! So tender and slow and intimate. Better than a detailed sex scene. Bravo!!!

[annabirmingham]

Thanks! I think you can sometimes have too much sex and not enough tenderness, I find it's nicer to write too :)
Anna x

Friday at the sandbox

[argentine65]

There is no doubt that between them there is something more that only sex. But I have the feeling that they still don't know the other well, they have to talk about their lives. Thank you so much for sharing. Martha

Re: Friday at the sandbox

[annabirmingham]

Thanks Martha,
You're right, it's still very early for the guys but there is definitely something big happening here.
More soon!
Anna x

[sliveredmoon]

This is no little thing we got goin on here! ;)

Very sweet. You've written a very sexy scene. The power in the scene, for me, is in the tenderness. Sweaty, sticky, and perfect.

[annabirmingham]

Thanks so much! I think sometimes it's what you don't say that can be sexier than what is actually said - too much detail can turn me off (and is a pain to write too!)
Anna x

[ramona4jake]

warm beer - yuck ! but in this company... may I have one too ? ;o)

[annabirmingham]

LOL - you might have to get in line (behind me!!)
Thanks for reading :)
Anna x

[mira986]

Super hot, but also totally sweet! Love it!! ♥

[annabirmingham]

Thanks! Glad it worked for you :)
Anna x