Friday at the sandbox - Part 17 "Cold turkey"

Sep 28, 2011 14:36

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground...

Warnings - none
Length - c300 words
Feedback - yes please!

Apologies, folks. This one is a little shorter than usual, I'll try to make it up to you next time :)

The guys have a fun evening at Ennis' place...

clickety click )

fridayatthesandbox

Leave a comment

Comments 46

(The comment has been removed)

annabirmingham September 29 2011, 13:17:00 UTC
Oh yes, bouncy rabbits getting up to all kinds of mischief, heh heh...
Thanks for reading, as always!
Anna x

Reply


ennisjackgal September 28 2011, 19:09:01 UTC
Short but sweet :)

Jack's in LOVE! And I think Ennis is too :)

Reply

annabirmingham September 29 2011, 13:17:29 UTC
I think they are :) Who could not love these two?
Anna x

Reply

ennisjackgal September 29 2011, 16:52:01 UTC
I think you're asking the wrong person! :D

Reply


changeineed September 28 2011, 19:14:19 UTC
Dear Anna,
Sorry for not commenting on your story recently but let me assure you that i always read it as soon as you post each chapter. I love it. So poignant, so tender, so hot, so true...no unnecessary drama, no narcissistic personalities...just two everyday people trying to get what everyone craves...someone to fall in love with, someone to be together...and this short chapter expresses exactly that. Good job...

Reply

annabirmingham September 29 2011, 13:19:30 UTC
Oh no worries, it means a lot that you read at all! Thanks so much for the comments. I wanted to make this a more 'real' story - almost mundane - as life is never your own when you have kids and there is so much to juggle. I imagine it must be so hard to find love as a single parent. I'm glad I could help our boys out here :)
Anna x

Reply


emmiska September 28 2011, 19:37:55 UTC
The truth comes from child's mouth! :D Thanks for the update!

Reply

annabirmingham September 29 2011, 13:20:24 UTC
Indeed it does! Bobby sure has a way of saying the wrong (or right!) thing at times!
Thanks :)
Anna x

Reply


roby100 September 28 2011, 19:41:43 UTC
Even if it's short I needed it! I'm addicted to this story and I welcome short or long "doses"!
So, Friday is near again: will they behave while watching the kids playing?!

Thanks for the update.
A big hug
Roby

Reply

annabirmingham September 29 2011, 13:22:22 UTC
Thanks Roby :)
Glad to help out with your addiction! Not long til Friday and the guys might have to be subtle at the playground - no telling what Bobby or the girls might say!
Anna x

Reply


Leave a comment

Up