Friday at the sandbox - Part 17 "Cold turkey"

Sep 28, 2011 14:36

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground...

Warnings - none
Length - c300 words
Feedback - yes please!

Apologies, folks. This one is a little shorter than usual, I'll try to make it up to you next time :)

The guys have a fun evening at Ennis' place...

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fridayatthesandbox

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cosmok44 September 29 2011, 02:44:46 UTC
It was short but had alot of meaning in those few words. Wow! Ennis better not break his heart!! Loved little Bobby & his observations. "bouncy" how cute is that! thank you, gail

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annabirmingham September 29 2011, 21:16:40 UTC
Thanks Gail!
I don't think Ennis plans to break his heart - it's no little thing to get involved with someone when you have kids, so I hope they are both in this for real :)
Anna x

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zeltia September 29 2011, 11:09:09 UTC
How sweet!!! ♥ I adore that they feel so much for each other. They're freaking in love and they look like cute teens.

Loved every word here. Thank you so much.

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annabirmingham September 29 2011, 21:17:34 UTC
Thanks so much! I agree that they are in lurrve and acting like teenagers - I'm kind of envious of them.
More soon!
Anna x

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gwylliondream September 29 2011, 13:28:45 UTC
This is so lovely. I like the way it unfolds in these brief snippets.

XO
Donna

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annabirmingham September 29 2011, 21:18:06 UTC
Thanks Donna - I like writing the short snippets - less pressure for me!
Anna x

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Friday at the sandbox argentine65 September 29 2011, 18:09:08 UTC
Bobby has powers, he reads minds. I like a lot how Jack (and Ennis)take their time to get together, don't run. They will live their sweet life in time. Thank you so much for sharing. Martha

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Re: Friday at the sandbox annabirmingham September 29 2011, 21:19:22 UTC
Thanks Martha!
Heheh, I like your take on mind-reading Bobby - not sure he has special powers, just that he doesn't understand tact yet and simply says what he sees!
Anna x

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bbmgirlfan September 30 2011, 04:55:21 UTC
Glad they talk and text and miss each other!

Jeanine

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annabirmingham October 1 2011, 02:10:56 UTC
Thanks Jeanine. I'm sure the guys say a lot when they talk - we can only imagine :)
Anna x

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