Friday at the sandbox - Part 18 "TGIF"

[annabirmingham]

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground...

Warnings - none
Length - c450 words
Feedback - yes please!

Jack has been a patient bunny all week...

Comments

[mosquito1013]

Short and cute! Perfect ficlet to read while commuting on the packed subway. Thanks!

[annabirmingham]

Thanks so much - I'm happy to have made your commute a little less stressful :)
Anna x

[annabuffy]

How cute is Jack that he's so anxious to see Ennis. So the boys have the whole night together. Hmmm, I'm guessing that some sexy times are ahead after their Bud and Spud date. (I know maybe a little lame even for me, but couldn't resist once again.) ;p

[annabirmingham]

Lame or not I still like your ideas!! Heheh :)
Thanks so much for continuing to read.
Anna x

[bbmgirlfan]

Awesome writing! With just a few paragraphs, you convey how much they've missed each other, how much they need to be together. Really good!

Jeanine

[annabirmingham]

Thanks Jeanine, so glad it worked for you :)
Anna x

[two_blue_stars]

So much lust in so few words. Really fun!

[annabirmingham]

Thanks!! Glad you liked it!
Anna x

[aileenfan]

Jack has been patient for the whole week and now we must be patient, too:))) They're so perfect together:)))

[annabirmingham]

I know, I hate waiting too! Even 400 words is tricky to write some days with everything else that goes on!
Anna x