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annabirmingham

Friday at the sandbox - Part 25 "A picture painting"

Nov 21, 2011 15:42

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground...

Warnings - none
Length - c400 words.
Feedback - yes please!

Bobby got answers to some awkward questions...

( clickety click )

fridayatthesandbox

Comments 45

george66 November 21 2011, 21:11:44 UTC

Anna,

Beautiful...just beautiful. Bobby is so adorable, but yeah, Jack's right about teaching the boy the art of matters. But in this case it's excusable because he wanted to show his "Daddee" his painting of his new family. How could you NOT love it?!?

I love how Ennis was able to figure out the painting by simply looking at it. It seems so natural that he would be able to do it because he seems to be very observant a person.

He also seems to be always hungry whenever he goes over to Jack's house...especially for meat. LOL!!

With each story you give us Anna your skills as a story teller grows with more talent and more awesomeness.

hugs

george

george66 November 22 2011, 00:56:19 UTC

I meant "manners" not "matters." LOL!!

annabirmingham November 22 2011, 19:48:13 UTC

Oh George, I just want to reach right in there and give you a big smoochy virtual hug!!

I love how Ennis was able to figure out the painting by simply looking at it. It seems so natural that he would be able to do it because he seems to be very observant a person.

So true. Ennis has always seemed more 'internal' to me than Jack, and more skilled at picking up subtle signs.

Thanks so much for every comment you have left - I treasure them all! I have a plot bunny for another story in my head - way different from this fic, so I just hope I get the time to write it :)

Anna x

bowl_of_glow November 21 2011, 21:23:05 UTC

June? Was it June? Really? Time really flies!

I will miss this cute cute series sooo much ♥ *hugs this saga real tight*

Thanks for sharing :)

annabirmingham November 22 2011, 19:49:02 UTC

Yep, June it was. Seems like a lifetime ago!! Heheh!
Thanks so much for reading along.
Anna x

gwylliondream November 21 2011, 21:37:00 UTC

Adorable and scorching hot in the same sparse span of words! What a wonderful story this is!

XO
Donna

annabirmingham November 22 2011, 19:49:35 UTC

Thanks Donna :)
It's been such fun to write this one!
Anna x

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annabirmingham November 22 2011, 19:50:49 UTC

Thanks so much, Tina!
I'm gonna miss these guys too, but there's always the chance they might 'speak' to me again sometime.
Anna x

roby100 November 21 2011, 22:48:46 UTC

Bobby is more adorable than ever! I love him, I love the guys and I love the story. It will be hard to let it go, really hard.

I have a feeling that the guys are going to skip dinner....

Thanks for the sweet update.
A big hug
Roby

annabirmingham November 22 2011, 19:51:53 UTC

Thanks as always, Roby :)
It's always hard to finish something, but then it's exciting to start something new too. I really hope I can find the time to do what I want to do next!
Hugs to you
Anna x