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annabirmingham

Friday at the sandbox - Part 25 "A picture painting"

Nov 21, 2011 15:42

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground...

Warnings - none
Length - c400 words.
Feedback - yes please!

Bobby got answers to some awkward questions...

( clickety click )

fridayatthesandbox

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annabirmingham November 22 2011, 20:16:24 UTC

Thanks so much for all your great comments :)
It is sad to see something end, but it's also a relief to finish too!
Hugs back at ya
Anna x

emmiska November 22 2011, 07:50:43 UTC

Oh, this is so sweet! I hate to see it ending, but at least we've had so much fun!

annabirmingham November 22 2011, 20:17:05 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you had fun along the way - that's what it's all about :)
Anna x

tizi17 November 22 2011, 08:04:24 UTC

loved this series and will miss it - well done, thanks!

annabirmingham November 22 2011, 20:17:22 UTC

Thanks so much - so glad you have enjoyed it!
Anna x

lightning070 November 22 2011, 15:18:26 UTC

I'm glad both Bobby and Ennis daughters could accept their dad's relationship.
Jack and Bobby are so cute together. :) You can see that Jack's a very good father.
Hahaha, spiders! :D Bobby might not be an artist but that though comes through amazingly. Interesting that Ennis knew what it was but Jack didn't. ;)
Ooh, Ennis is teasing Jack! Lovely. He seems to be pretty secure in his sexuality now. :) That's great. :D

Great story! Kudos!
A bit sad it's almost over though. :( But it has been a great read. :)

annabirmingham November 22 2011, 20:36:31 UTC

Thanks!
Yeah, kids' drawings are hard to interpret sometimes. LOL!
Ennis in this story is certainly a bit more forward thinking than in the OS. I wanted this one to be pretty much angst free - makes a nice change!!
Anna x

grlewis November 22 2011, 17:47:24 UTC

what??? what??? you're bringing this story to an end? no, no. it's way too soon. we have to have the families move in together and settle in....oh, you're not planning that, are you? rats. you wouldn't be doing all that in one more short section....i do enjoy this story and hate to see it ending.

rats. gr

p.s. if i had more couth i would have said something like sbaf donna said, or slivered moon. but i guess i just don't.

grlewis November 22 2011, 17:51:06 UTC

'sbaf' should have read 'what'. don't know what my fingers were doing.

annabirmingham November 22 2011, 20:48:01 UTC

LOL, no worries!
Yeah, sorry it has to come to an end, but I feel this story has reached a natural conclusion. The boys are in a good place, are they not?!
Thanks so much for reading!
Anna x