Call on Me - Part 4

Oct 18, 2012 14:21

Genre: Modern day AU/AU. Fluffy fun with no angst. Ennis and Jack meet when Jack goes into a store to buy a phone for his mother. His mother insists on playing cupid (and embarrassing Jack no end in the process)

Words: c1000
Warnings: None
Comments: Yes please!!

NOTE - I have been meaning to apologise for the lack of Beta on this story. I got ( Read more... )

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gwylliondream October 18 2012, 18:57:21 UTC
Yes!

*fist pump*

Smooth move with the business card!

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annabirmingham October 19 2012, 12:26:59 UTC
Smooth indeed! Woo hoo for Ennis!!
A x

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annabirmingham October 19 2012, 12:28:39 UTC
Thanks! I do love the whole build up leading to the first 'encounter'- all the better when one (or both) of the guys are nervous. They do get there eventually, thank goodness!
A x

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annabirmingham October 19 2012, 12:28:58 UTC
Yes, Jack - get the damn hint!!!!
A x

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l_rabbit October 18 2012, 20:16:22 UTC
This story is delightful!

The only error I saw was "Goddamned it" instead of "Goddamn it". Everything else was perfect.

Thanks for writing!

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annabirmingham October 19 2012, 12:30:56 UTC
Thanks so much - have changed it :)
More soon!
A x

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dreamy40 October 18 2012, 20:44:19 UTC
Loving it x.
Please Jack, please call him

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annabirmingham October 19 2012, 12:31:29 UTC
Thanks! Yes, Jack will get his act together and call him. I promise :)
A x

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