Angel - Oneshot

[annafeu]

Title: Angel

Comments

[envybleedsgreen]

...I could just fall asleep right now and never want to get up because I would have to face this. Wow. This is shocking.

Thanks for sharing.

[annafeu]

haha sorry about that

thank you for reading!

[taffyn]

holyshit ... ... after all that, i'm surprised no one died.
my mind is blank ah.

this sorta reminds me of the human centipede, brings back the chills ><

nonetheless, your writing is splendid. :]

[annafeu]

ugh don't remind me of the human centipede that thing was horrible lol

thank you! i'm glad you liked it :)

[iamcrazie]

Read this in AFF, but just wanted to leave a comment here too.

This was so utterly disturbing and creepy, but in a good way. OMG, poor luhan and what the hell is going in your mind sehunnnn ;A;
I loved that even though this was horror, you managed to portray all the emotions and the suspense really well.
Horror seems like one of the harder genres to write and you did it amazingly well!
This is really really really super super super good for your first horror fic. Looking forward to more of these interesting fics and your other fic updates too!

[annafeu]

thank you so much! ;A; i hope you enjoy my future fics and updates!

[charliebnim]

i don't even know what to say, this was disturbing to an all new level, but i just couldn't stop reading, it's like those shocking things that happen and you just can't stop staring. I'm waiting for a sequel :D thank you so much :D

[annafeu]

thanks, i'm glad you liked it ^-^

[thoughtsofgray]

okay wow honestly, i have a thing for horror and gore and just plain disturbing things so basically all my needs were satisfied in this piece. i really liked your imagery, the way you portrayed the entire thing so that the readers would be anxious and not be able to guess what's going on. i really liked that, it totally kept me on the edge of my seat just wondering what could sehun be possibly trying to do. i think you executed the idea really well because through out the entire thing i was like 'no way omg no way omgggggg'

oh and i loved the psychological aspect of the fic. it was amazing. idk the entire thing was amazing

AND THE ENDING?? OHGOD THANK YOU FOR A HAPPY(??) ENDING because when sehun took luhan through the stairs i knew it. i was like 'okay that's it luhan is dead he's gonna die wow omg' but you saved him so thank you for that lmao

[annafeu]

LMAO thank you hehe i'm glad you liked it <3 i just didn't have the heart to kill luhan in the end lol