Comments | annalazarus: Fully Retractable, Dean/OFC/OFC, NC-17

annalazarus

Fully Retractable, Dean/OFC/OFC, NC-17

Oct 15, 2007 22:46

When I get stuck in boring meetings at work, I work out spectacularly pornographic scenarios in my head to keep from falling asleep. I've had a lot of boring meetings lately. This is the end result.

Beta by the lovely oxoniensis, who is always very patient with me ( Read more... )

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musesfool October 16 2007, 18:24:16 UTC

Oh wow. Ridiculously hot.

annalazarus October 16 2007, 22:52:20 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it!

oxoniensis October 16 2007, 22:23:45 UTC

Oh, my, I LOVE the finished result! It just got even hotter, and the Dean voice at the start is perfect now.

annalazarus October 16 2007, 22:30:35 UTC

I loved that you mentioned that it was too formal, because I started the story at work and was probably locked into that style. I knew there was something wrong with it; I just didn't know what. Reason 1,0001 why you're an awesome beta!

oxoniensis October 16 2007, 22:34:17 UTC

It's easy to do that - I've been writing Pushing Daisies fic, and I just wrote half an email in the style of the narrator of the show! *g* And I knew you had the right voice in you, that I wasn't pushing you too much, so I'm really glad my couple of thoughts helped! :-)

annalazarus October 16 2007, 22:38:30 UTC

Yeah, "Pornier!" us always a thought I love to see. :-)

Did you refer to everyone by their profession in the Pushing Daisies email? :-)

(aside: one of my friends and her cohorts once spent a month emailing each other in the style of Jane Austen. Classic.)

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mona1347 October 16 2007, 22:42:09 UTC

*KEYSMASH*

Jesus. Pure gold.

annalazarus October 16 2007, 22:51:36 UTC

Hee! Seriously, why is there not more Dean threesome fic?

Glad you liked it!

thegirlisfrail October 16 2007, 23:35:45 UTC

This was just, well, fucking better than hot. I really can't think of a word, but jesus, this was hot.

annalazarus October 17 2007, 23:53:33 UTC

Thanks! I actually wrote the porniest bits at work and had to keep looking over my shoulder to make sure no one was behind me. Ha.

thegirlisfrail October 18 2007, 03:37:32 UTC

Heh. I know that situation all too well. I've been there so many times at work, either reading or writing it.

frahulettaes October 17 2007, 00:15:39 UTC

I read this while listening to Mozart's Requiem. Interestingly, it was a good match. *fans self*

annalazarus October 17 2007, 00:37:12 UTC

Fascinating! I love that piece. I guess both are melodramatic and, uh, climactic. :-)

Thanks for reading.

frahulettaes October 17 2007, 00:52:06 UTC

oh totally...;)