New Chapter Up...

[annapurna_2]

Hope all of you are well and happy and keeping out of trouble (except for the good kind). Life continues to be crazy hectic on this end. Some very good, some pretty bad, but mostly in between.

Did some writing over the recent holiday. I’ve managed to finish another chapter of Marking Time. Under different circumstances, I would ask the excellent pennydrdful

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[timeofchange]

What? What thing to do? *bounces with impatience*

[annapurna_2]

LOL!

Workin' on it!

[slaymesoftly]

I'm glad to see an update, but really glad you included the summary. :) Maybe not so long before the next one?

[annapurna_2]

Yeah, I figure including a recap is the least I can do. Heh.

I'll really, really, really, really try to update soon! Honest. Really. Crossing all fingers, toes, legs and arms! (But it's gettin' kind of hard to type this way...)

[louise39]

"But for those who seek, there is no return.”

So what are they going to do? Especially the non-patient Spike.

[annapurna_2]

Oh, but that would be telling! Hee.

Love your icon!

[louise39]

The icon is by awmp and a love!

[jacobs_muse]

Yay! Update! I hope the muse sticks with you.

In between evolving, eh? Then perhaps Buffy just slowed the process instead of denying him anything.

My only editing suggestion is that you don't need as many instances of "had". The word distances us from the action, so sticking to past instead of past perfect has a bit more impact.

[annapurna_2]

Yay! Update! I hope the muse sticks with you.

Thank you! You and me both!

In between evolving, eh? Then perhaps Buffy just slowed the process instead of denying him anything.

Maaaybe ... and maybe not. Hee.

My only editing suggestion is that you don't need as many instances of "had". The word distances us from the action, so sticking to past instead of past perfect has a bit more impact.

Yes! I know exactly what you mean. I waffled back and forth about that on the final read-through. I took some out then I put them back in. I will definitely go back and take care of that as soon as I can.

Excellent. Thank you so much.

Marking time 20

[cordykitten]

Good to see Spike made it.
Mmmmh in between... could mean Spike could become human or superhuman. Weird that it stopped.
So Spike wasn't in bed. Counting for Buffy to find him, make her jealous? More questions - and again, bad cliffhanger. ;) You're good with them.

Re: Marking time 20

[annapurna_2]

Good to see Spike made it.

I know! I was really worried there for a second. lol!

More questions - and again, bad cliffhanger. ;) You're good with them.

I'm evil that way. I just can't seem to help myself. Heh.

Bad, annapurna, bad! ;-)

Thanks for reading! ::hugs::