Round Robin Fic

[anne35]

Title: What Goes Around
Background: Post "The Girlfriend." Angst, AU, and PG rating (so far).
Ground rules: This is a round robin fic. The first person to claim it in a comment writes the next part and posts it as soon as they want or at least by... hopefully next week. The installment can be any length, change style, genre, POV, and go in any

Comments

[brandywine421]

Gah!

Eee!

I can't wait to see what happens next!

This fic is amazing!

ETA: Sorry, brain got carried away - I loved Ryan's internal monologue and all the stuff that he didn't say, it just about broke me. \o/

[jassylou]

Everything brandy said ITA with. I just wish that Ryan would open his mouth and speak to Sandy. Ryans thinking himself that Sandy is everything he wants and needs in a father figure!

Do you know that you write sooo well that I was actually holding my breath until I realised it was Sandy at the pool house door.I was screaming for him to see the hand print on the window.

I can't wait to see who takes us to what and with who and to where next. I'm thinking it maybe a very dark place for a while!*cackle*

All the parts in the round robin have been amazing as is yours anne:D the end result is going to be incredible.Thanks for writing it's much appreciated. *snogs*

[anne35]

Thanks so much for the compliment. I've got to tell you, I was more than a little intimidated following the three previous authors.

I couldn't decide whether or not to end the story with Sandy slowly turning back towards Ryan. In the end, I decided it was best to leave it to the next person.

I'm guessing this fic will stay dark for a while, but you never know. Like Chazper said, someone could turn this into a total crack fic.

And thank you for reading and commenting.

[anne35]

I think the thing that's so great about this is I can't wait to see what happens next either. It's quite a different/exciting experience writing when you have know idea where the next chapter will lead the characters.

I liked the idea of the internal monologue, too. It was one of the last things I added. I had toyed with the idea of leaving it with Sandy just entering the pool house.

[katwoman76]

I absolutely love it.
But as much as I enjoy all this I really hope someone soon bites the bullet and moves this ominous picture event from vague to detailled. The suspense is driving me crazy.

[anne35]

Glad you liked it.

To be honest, I took the coward's way out. I really didn't want to be the one who says what's in those photos. It will shape the rest of the fic and I didn't want the responsibility.

So I guess my punishment for being a chicken is that I have to live with the suspense too.

[fredsmith518]

I think you did a good job Anne, well done, I especially like your cliff hanger and that you didn't go dark.

[anne35]

Thank you. For only being two pages, this gave me quite a bit of grief.
Despite the abundance of angst in ToF, I have my limits on how dark I can go.

[zbyszko]

Great addition to the story.

And I still say those pics are the infamous Snoopy ones- la, la, la, la.............. Snowglobe : )

[anne35]

I'm glad you liked it.

I never said they weren't of Ryan as Snoopy. I made him twelve, the perfect age for a Junior High musical.

[anne35]

Have you already forgotten all the drama of being a teenager? Some of the conversations I overhear (and I swear I really, really try not to)at hubby's ballgames are always life and death...at least according to the kids.

[60schic]

I love Ryan's internal dialogue at the end. But I have to say, all of you have made this a work of art, and I don't think I'm going to take an installment b/c I don't want to follow all of you!

[anne35]

Thanks, chic. I was struggling with the conversation with Sandy and this was the only way I could make it work.

I don't think I'm going to take an installment b/c I don't want to follow all of you!

Nope. Sorry. Nice try. You can't use that as an excuse. If I was brave enough to follow Chazper, Cheeky and Themus (talk about pressure) then anyone can take the next installment.

[60schic]

We'll see... ;)