Don't ask me to explain - A House fan fic.

[annechonps]

Title: Don't ask me to explain
Author: annechonps
Pairing: Thirteen/Cameron; Chase/Cameron; House/Cuddy; House/Wilson; Wilson/Amber;  etc, etc.
Spoilers: 1) You have to be patient to read it. If you're only looking for a making-out fic, you may be disappointed, it will be a long time before Cameron and Thirteen really become something close to

Comments

[annechonps]

thank you! Will upload as soon as I can :)

[shananigan00]

I love the idea! Just a little constructive criticism though, you've got a lot of misspellings and grammatical errors. I can't wait to read more though! :)

[annechonps]

Thank you! Oh, and I'll try to ask someone to beta next chapter before posting :)

[shananigan00]

no problem :) looking forward to more

and if you can't find a beta, i would be more than happy to help

[annechonps]

really? that's good to hear!
May I send you to your email tomorrow?

[sapphire_magick]

The whole idea of the fic is really good... in fact, I can't wait to read more of it.

(Please don't take what i say below as an insult. Just trying to help you. =))

However, the lack of paragraphs or break between dialogue is making it really hard to read. Perhaps, after every dialogue each character says, put it on the next line. Also, when each character speaks, use quotation marks: "Blah blah..."

[annechonps]

Glad you liked the idea!

And thank you for the warnings. I don't take it as an insult at all, it helps me to improve. About the breaks and paragraphs: it was all good in my writer's block, but somehow it disappeared in LiveJournal :( I'll try to fix it next chapter!
And the quotation marks: I can't believe I forgot that! I live in Brazil, and here we use "-" for dialogues, and I really didn't remember that it's different for, I don't know, the rest of the world? lol

[jelly_jellyfish]

Greaaaaaat <3
Seriously, A-do-rei. O final ficou igualzinho aos episódios mesmo, e eu imagino o trabalho que vc teve pra pesquisar todas essas doenças em portugues e em ingles :P

Bem, e eu vou falar só em portugues mesmo, babem ;D

Ah, a proposito, tem uns errinhos de digitação mesmo, mas depois tu ajeita. Me deu vontade de escrever, mas precisa de muita disposição, pesquisa, etc, etc, e eu não to com muita cabeça pra isso.

Não demora com o novo post, tá?
-bjsmeligagata100%sedussaum

[jelly_jellyfish]

PS. To pensando em fazer um novo livejournal. Nao gostei do nome do meu -bjs