Comments | anneline: XMMFicathon Fic: Gitania, Kurt/Logan NC-17

anneline

XMMFicathon Fic: Gitania, Kurt/Logan NC-17

Jul 18, 2005 18:56

Title: Gitania ( Read more... )

Comments 14

popehippo July 19 2005, 00:43:27 UTC

As I do with almost all your stuff, I love it. I really like the exploration into Kurt's pysche. :3

anneline July 19 2005, 16:28:20 UTC

Hee! Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I had a lot of trouble writing all the flashbacks. I love your pretty icon.

popehippo July 20 2005, 20:02:11 UTC

Everyone should feel the love of mussy!Odo after reading Kurt/Logan smut. XD

jamaillith July 19 2005, 08:58:33 UTC

Oh, lovely, lovely. Mmmm.. You have such a wonderful way of getting inside character's heads, without having to wander off into extremes. They say things through actions. I like that.

The only problem is, there're too many lines I'd love to quote here. :3

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anneline July 19 2005, 16:30:21 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad the inner thoughts didn't come off as too heavy-handed. This was one of my more meditative pieces but I didn't want to overstate the religious angst.

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anneline July 19 2005, 17:35:25 UTC

Of coarse. You don't have to ask me twice to pimp my work.

anneline July 19 2005, 17:34:57 UTC

Thank-you. I' hoped you'd like this. It's been a while since I wrote any Logurt. It's fun to play with Kurt and Logan again. I've actually been to that church in Saintes-Maries-de-la-Mer. I've always wanted to set a Kurt story there.

buzzylittleb July 19 2005, 20:23:28 UTC

Wow, a mussed up messed up Kurt is always a wonder to behold.

And written this well, what else could he be?

anneline July 19 2005, 21:39:48 UTC

Thanks! I do feel a guilty roughing Kurt up so much in this story. But he can take it.

fuzzytale July 19 2005, 20:44:13 UTC

Mmmm...managed to miss this when you first posted it, so glad you put it up at Logurt. Really enjoyed how you handled the flashbacks, very nicely done and detailed without being at all heavy handed. Your use of imagery is also exceptional and you did a great job creating the atmosphere at the church in the flashbacks.

I particularly liked this, it was such a good way to describe how his life has changed. "One minute poised to leap from a trapeze, every move planned and perfect. And the next, on the verge of stabbing a stranger."

This really caught my eye as well... "His stomach did flips which always reminded him of his adolescent technique for picking up boys."

Thanks for sharing and hope you had so much fun playing with them that you'll want to take them out for another spin around the block. ;)

anneline July 19 2005, 21:43:56 UTC

Thank-you! The flashbacks gave me a lot of trouble so it's nice to hear that they worked for you. Thanks for all the nice comments. I've still got a few logurt bunnies to write, for sure.