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HP Fic: Sweeter This, Alice/Frank Longbottom Rated R

May 15, 2006 21:07

Title: Sweeter This ( Read more... )

Comments 19

etrangere August 17 2006, 20:50:29 UTC

Oh God.

I really love your Alice, and your Frank. Could I marry them ? I adore how she kicks ass and how easy going he is.

The ending is perfectly chilling. Stunning.

anneline August 17 2006, 22:27:00 UTC

Thanks. I have a soft spot for action!moms. I really enjoyed writing this story, though I wish it could have had a happier ending.

mosaic December 6 2006, 19:53:04 UTC

I love this! Alice is completely awesome. Fucking your mum? is perhaps the best line. But I love the slow descent into insanity. Oh, so sad, but so wonderfully written.

merlins_babe August 15 2008, 03:00:12 UTC

This story has been rec'ed at

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ceirdwenfc August 15 2008, 03:25:08 UTC

This was so sad. I'm still crying. It's so different knowing what happened and being shown what happened. It was much easier for the Potters, wasn't it - just dying. They're so heroic, and I love the differences in their personalities, and how Neville received the best of the both of them. This was a remarkable story, and I'm glad that I found it. I've added it to my memories. Unbelievably poignant. Thank you.

thanfiction August 15 2008, 04:23:19 UTC

Friended you doesn't begin to cover it. More coherant review to come later when I've re-read it another fifty times and stopped leaping around the room in delight at having found someone else who has a genuine respect for the Longbottoms and treats them like AURORS who were the equal to James and Lily, not jokes. Oh, and if you do their son half the justice you've done his parents, I just might have to propose...

*runs off to look for more of your writing*