Poetry Challenge Fic: Immemorial, Sirius/Remus Rated R

[anneline]

Title: Immemorial
Pairing: Sirius/Remus
Rating: R for slash.
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Warnings: Angst
Summary: Sirius and Remus and a progression of autumns.
A/N: This was written in response to the hp_literotica Poetry line challenge.
Thanks to summerborn for the beta.

The leaves, they were withering and sere

Comments

[sambethe]

aillil summed up most of my feelings - it really was like a roller coaster. I think you caught a good bit of a Poe-like mood with this story. A sad but lovely piece.

[anneline]

Thank-you. Poe-like mood, cool! Your icon is very cute!

[glassbomb]

Moving, totally in-character, absolutely brilliant. *mems*

[anneline]

Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it.

[painted_fall]

Oh. Oh.

One of the best I've read in awhile. Realistic and beautiful.

Gorgeous work. Both of them were just perfect. <3

[anneline]

Thank-you! I'm glad it seems realistic, I wanted it slightly poetic but still grounded in reality.

[lenap_trap]

and again i'm crying!!! *snuff-snuff*
i'm not a big fan of this pair but u made=wrote them so good... really good
thanks!