Comments | anneline: HP Fic: The Game, Lucius/Severus/Remus NC-17

anneline

HP Fic: The Game, Lucius/Severus/Remus NC-17

May 23, 2006 16:44

Title: The Game ( Read more... )

Comments 31

sookail May 23 2006, 21:24:13 UTC

Seriously, you sooo rock! It`s really IC-kind-of-believeable!

anneline May 24 2006, 03:08:04 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I hope Severus and Remus aren't out of character.

ion_bond May 23 2006, 22:28:30 UTC

Oh Anne. I didn't think I liked this kind of thing.

Not only was it hot, but I really dig your characterization. Remus and Severus are really complicated, and your Lucius has more depth than any character with such skimpy canonical development has any right to.

Malfoy scion is gigantic, big poof.

And that made me laugh out loud.

anneline May 24 2006, 03:14:40 UTC

Hey there. Thanks for reading! I;m glad that the story didn't make you run away screaming. I wanted to write some gratuitous kink. I was very nervous about writing Lucius.

etrangere May 23 2006, 22:54:03 UTC

Rocks, very much rocks. I love the innocent manner they get to the D/s and roleplay. Vry realistic and sexy because of that. Heh, the thought of 13 yars old Severus coming onto Lucius is precious. Getting into the whole threesome was dlightful !

anneline May 24 2006, 03:33:12 UTC

Thanks! You're too nice. I wanted it to be somewhat realistic but still really kinky.

anglo_don_juan May 24 2006, 00:41:46 UTC

Totally awesome.....Man....I'd quote my favourite parts, but I'd just be babbling incoherently anyway...so it's pointless. lol

Great job on the story...I love Humiliated!Sev and Dom!Lupin....and I love them switched too hehe

anneline May 24 2006, 03:35:01 UTC

Thanks. I really like Dom!Lupin in almost any pairing, but especially with Snape. I like them switched also.

jedirita May 24 2006, 04:22:52 UTC

Okay, that was hilarious and hot, and oddly touching all at the same time.

I especially love Luscious messing up Remus's name.

anneline May 24 2006, 15:47:34 UTC

Thanks! I wanted it to be funny. I think D's are hot but also a little silly -- so, you have to keep all the characters grounded.

Yeah, Malfoy's in no position to make fun of people's names. I think if Remus hadn't been so young and flustered, he'd have thought to call Malfoy some choice things, too.