You did an amazing job with this chapter, honestly loved how respectful he is, how understanding and how he's letting her decide when and what's alright. Even during sex, for him is all about her, not him.
I giggled at 'fuck-me-red' and loved the ending. Great job Anne.
"He is the vault of heaven over her, his shoulders a wide arch, horizon to horizon. He is a big man when clothed, imposing when armed and armoured, but naked he is ancient and elemental and everything she had wanted as long as she could remember wanting.
Her head sinks into the cool of the pillow below, and above her is the perfect gold-and-speckle of his neck and the coarse bristle of his beard and the long, chord-and-tendon lines of his throat.
Each thrust lifts her and rocks her and knocks the breath from her lungs."
that has got to be the most fucking gorgeous description of missionary-position sex i have ever, ever read.
I'll have to reread this when my eyes (and brain) aren't sleep-addled, but this:
"He is the vault of heaven over her, his shoulders a wide arch, horizon to horizon. He is a big man when clothed, imposing when armed and armoured, but naked he is ancient and elemental and everything she had wanted as long as she could remember wanting."
is absolute perfection. Just lovely!
Passages like that are what turn smut into erotica. :)
Wow this was very good!!! so elegant and yet hot and sexy and romantic and it was so nice to see how much sandor wants to make sansa know that she rules him and has a choice. she can decide what to do when and where because he cares for her so much that he will only approach her when she is ready and of course, in the long run, it worked and now they are truly married! this was beautiful!! :D
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You did an amazing job with this chapter, honestly loved how respectful he is, how understanding and how he's letting her decide when and what's alright. Even during sex, for him is all about her, not him.
I giggled at 'fuck-me-red' and loved the ending. Great job Anne.
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Her head sinks into the cool of the pillow below, and above her is the perfect gold-and-speckle of his neck and the coarse bristle of his beard and the long, chord-and-tendon lines of his throat.
Each thrust lifts her and rocks her and knocks the breath from her lungs."
that has got to be the most fucking gorgeous description of missionary-position sex i have ever, ever read.
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I had posted it once before, as a stand-alone drabble, but it seemed to work so perfectly for this part, I ended up recycling it.
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Not to mention I can just see him doing that...
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"He is the vault of heaven over her, his shoulders a wide arch, horizon to horizon. He is a big man when clothed, imposing when armed and armoured, but naked he is ancient and elemental and everything she had wanted as long as she could remember wanting."
is absolute perfection. Just lovely!
Passages like that are what turn smut into erotica. :)
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As I said, that line was originally a stand alone drabble, but it seemed to fit so well I just had to edit it a bit and include it.
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