for writers_muses #120.10 Juggling Two Different Aspects of Life

[anoldsoldier]

She sits on the sofa with a painted mug in her hand. The steam rises above it and the heat penetrates through the ceramic to her fingers. But he doesn’t think she feels it

Comments

[best_served_hot]

Oh now that was beautiful. It really, really was. Sad and simple and complicated all at once. Bittersweet is a good word for it. I love the repetition of the one line throughout and then the change between who the story started out with and who it ended with.

Very fluid and very stunning.

[anoldsoldier]

Thank you! I'm really glad you like it. I wanted to get something across without being too convoluted but while still showing solid snapshots.

:)

ooc

[rude_not_ginger]

Oh, this is just lovely. I actually got very teared up when they were looking at the stars. It's never a full everyone-gets-a-happy-ending, is it?

The use of repetition is perfect. I just can't even begin to describe how much I love this.

Re: ooc

[anoldsoldier]

I think that's part of the saddest thing in that even though we know Donna has Shaun and is undoubtedly a multi-millionaire now, there's also what Wilf told the Doctor about her looking sad and not knowing why. She was still better with the Doctor and she can't ever go back to that.

I'm so glad you liked it! <3

[hofficoffi]

WHY ARE YOU SO AMAZING? <3

[anoldsoldier]

NO. U.

Fankoooo <33

[its_notluck]

Awww, this is so beautiful!

[anoldsoldier]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.