For writers_muses #120 6. Auld Lang Syne.

Jan 04, 2010 00:59

"Granddad come inside it's bloody freezing out there ( Read more... )

writing: prompt, character: shaun temple, character: donna noble, community: writers muses, character: sylvia noble

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best_served_hot January 4 2010, 01:09:30 UTC
Oh, this. You put this together so beautifully. I could totally hear Wilf throughout, you didn't miss a beat.

"Yeah well I would if I could, I tell you. I'd be right up there with him if I could. Look after him, that's what he needs"

He does need it! And now you make me want to see more of it. Those two made such a fantastic pair, running about and saving the world.

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anoldsoldier January 4 2010, 01:18:17 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it. I wasn't sure what to do that would capture the moment well, I'm so glad you think this did!

And yes he does need it! They had a wonderful dynamic. Really wish it could have gone on!

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rude_not_ginger January 4 2010, 01:11:34 UTC
Oh, that's so wonderful, it brought a tear to my eye. And considering the cold, heartless individual you know I can be, that's saying quite a bit! I love how perfectly you've captured the relationship between Sylvia and Wilf, too.

<3<3

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anoldsoldier January 4 2010, 01:19:30 UTC
I'm so glad you like it! I wanted to make something that would be a snapshot that could really easily slip into canon and be believable.

<3!

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ambitious_woman January 4 2010, 05:01:08 UTC
This was absolutely wonderful. And lovely. And perfect.

That bit where you were worrying about his voice?

I wouldn't. ;)

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anoldsoldier January 4 2010, 05:04:04 UTC
<3! I'm so glad that you liked it!

And eee! Yay!

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ambitious_woman January 4 2010, 05:05:00 UTC
Loved it woman. Loved it.

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hofficoffi January 4 2010, 22:39:42 UTC
This is lovely! And so is your Wilf! He is absolutely adorable.

I also really like your Sylvia. Perfect post-JE characterization.

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anoldsoldier January 4 2010, 22:42:36 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad it came across right. So many voices I hadn't written before!

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alicecarter January 5 2010, 03:26:34 UTC
YOUNG LADY.

I just -- this was *perfect*. It honestly made me tear up, because Wilf always makes me tear up, and the voice is just so spot on.

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anoldsoldier January 5 2010, 03:31:40 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you liked it!

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