out of my mind...

[anomalousrhythm]

nothing seems to change in here

Comments

[chesus]

*thoughts, *of (sorry, spelling Nazi)

I thought this was really good. I am wondering if it truly relates to your feelings at the moment, if so, you should cheer up.

♥

[anomalousrhythm]

yes it did and I didnt really care about the punctuation on this peice. I usually pay more attention because I have seen some spelling erors as well spelling OF "ov" in the last line for example...

thanks for the tips though!