[thor fic] drink to me, babe, then (bury me in gold) part I

[anon_powers]

fandom: thor 2011
pairing: thor/loki
warnings: incest (not-pseudo), semi-au world, future mpreg, arranged/forced-marriage, dub-con, manipulative!dark!loki, stupid-in-love!manipulated!thor, odin's tries-to-be-a-good-dad-but-fails parenting, bamf!frigga.
summary: With Thor as king, Loki will be the closest to the throne.

A fill for this prompt at the norsekink

Comments

[japankasasagi]

thank you for posting these here, it is much easier to read, and easier to load on the ipod! When I first read this here, I thought you had a couple of paragraphs out of sequence. When Loki and Thor are finally getting hot and heavy, out of nowhere Sif appears, Loki comments on his jaw being sore, and she disappears again after remarking on her compromised walking ability, and I just couldn't help but laugh! Now I know, reading it full-size here (not on the ipod) that it's an editing decision, not a mistake.

But, I think this line -"It takes every ounce of self-control Loki has not to kick his brother out of his chambers" - is supposed to come after the break? It's thrown in with Sif and her knives, so it was a little bit jarring to read it there, then this big white space, then the bedroom scene. It's so minor, but since I'm here writing anyway, figured I'd mention it.

But love your writing, and it's so good to see it in all its uncut glory here! (or does 'uncut' sound absolutely wrong in this context??)