2013 edition

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☃ ❄ END OF YEAR FEEDBACK MEME ❄ ☃
adapted from here.
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[pateshie]

i've only read your more recent fics so this isn't all-inclusive but i've really enjoyed what i have seen :) i like how well you do the whole show-don't-tell thing because damn, you can express emotion so well through just a few carefully chosen words, which i seriously envy ;_; the only thing i would suggest is maybe a beta or a thorough read-through because i can spot a few spelling errors or slightly awkward phrasings that take me out of the fic for a moment, which sucks because your writing is so engaging and i want to stay immersed in it for as long as possible!

[pateshie]

thank you so much for the kind words, anon! ♥ they mean a lot. i can imagine how jarring those errors are. i do try to proofread as much as i can from my side but i'm not very good at it, and i feel like with my erratic writing, it'd be unfair to get a beta on board. however i will definitely try my best to make sure there are fewer mistakes from now on. i hope what i write continues to stay enjoyable to you!