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[anonfeedback]

☃ ❄ END OF YEAR FEEDBACK MEME ❄ ☃
adapted from here.
Time to spread some holiday cheer in the form of feedback for authors!

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[envybleedsgreen]

envybleedsgreen

I don't have much posted, but I would like critique on what I do have, please and thank you.

[swabluu]

your stories are usually shorter, but they're really nice because they're sweet and nicely written ^^ it'd be really nice if you could write a longer fic once in a while with a lot more plot! i'd be excited to read that (:

[sapphirewings15]

you are loved, my dear. don't ever stop writing <3

(i hope you see this because idk where to comment tbh)

[envybleedsgreen]

YOU'RE MY FRIEND THOUGH, YOUR OPINION IS BIASED. ;-;

[aurics]

your fics are really great ;~~~: don't stop writing!

[envybleedsgreen]

i wish your characters would stand out more. your plots and style of writing are great, but the way you characterise them makes them slink to the back. theyre not very interesting and they dont really fit into the story you give them. they seem very lacklustre and i could easily find replace their names with someone else's. the only advice i can give is maybe to step away from reading other people's fics and develop your own sense of who they are and then shaping the story to fit them instead of fitting the characters into the story.
hwaiting!

[envybleedsgreen]

FAEMIOFWURGBUIGIET, THANK YOU SO MUCH. I love everyone who commented, but you're really the only person who gave me critique? Ngl, it kinda burned me in the worst way possible, but it's a good burn!!!

I'll remember this, and I'll try my best! ;-;