Oneshot: Roomates PART B

[anonmyous]

Title:  Roomates PART B
Length: Oneshot
Parings: Jaeho
Genre: Smut, Romance, minor Angst
Rating: NC-17
Beta:  yunho1205 
Summary: Yunho fell in love with his best friend, but will his feelings be reciprocate?

Comments

[yunho1205]

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! You posted it!!! Yay!!! Spot, spot, spot!! :)))) ♥♥♥

[yunho1205]

LOL!! Man, when I was beta-ing this I had such a hard time staying focused on actually beta-ing and not just reading it!! LOL!!! You always distract me with the wonderful way you describe Jae's amazing body!!! YUMMMMM!! Hehehehehehe!!!

Ooooo!! And I just love top!Jae, especially one that knows what he's doing in bed!!! LOL!! I think my favorite part was when Jae sat on Yunho's chest and fucked his mouth!! :))))

[anonmyous]

thank you for your hard work!
lol, sorry for posting it too late. I meant to do it soon but got caught up with school so I have to wait until not to do it.
I have my standards when writing jaeho and i want to be detail in the smut as much as possible.

top!jae should know what's he doing or else...
bottom!yunnie will be disappointed XD
that part was based off from another story i read, credit to the author for inspiring me. :D
more jaeho coming soon so please help me!!!

[mysticspell]

Jaejoonie should love Yunho right now! lol Great story, I liked it, but felt bad for Yun being lonely and getting drunk. But at least it has a happy ending, because though Jae didn't say it, we all know he loves Yun. Nice job, thanks for sharing :)

[anonmyous]

you're welcom and thank you for reading.
yun should be love and he did!
jaeho <3!

[winter_subaki]

wow..Hot :)

[anonmyous]

thanks!
^^

[winter_subaki]

welcome ^^

[secretgirlanu]

I really like it. It's not just lust but so much love between them. Yunnie don't need suffer from now on.

PS: It's very well written. *envy you*

[anonmyous]

thank you!
lol, i don't prefer lust all the time, im more a true love person i like jaeho to be in love.
of course pwp shots about them are also love as well!
^^
credits goes to my friend, yunho1205, for her betaing as well.
:D

[gabrielle2720]

SPOTTY~~~

I LOVE~~ So hot!!! Jae love YUNHO! NOW!
Oh! BTW bb, i am working on your fic request and i am sorry if i can't post it early, i am not done yet, forgive me? :(

[anonmyous]

hey what's up?!
no worry about it the request! take as long as you like, im expecting a good smut scene though :D
<3 ya bb!

[gabrielle2720]

Here, i am nervous! Fuck! I am not good at smut! If you read my smut fictions, it was a total fail, now i am nervous on what my fiction will came out to be!! Haiiish, i am your BIGGEST fan and i am nervous /pout./ you hate me now, i know =(

[anonmyous]

ahahaha!
lol, no need to worry.
if anything, porn (straight or gay) is the answer.
i won't lie, some of my oneshots are based off of those but i still make where it's still authentic and original in my own words. just take bits and bits of it and let your muse take over.
granted, it took me AGES just to finished ONE FREAKIN' SHOT but...to have all of you read and comment, it was worth the efforts.
take your time on it and you'll get more inspirations as you put thoughts into it.
^^