When the Light Went Out - oneshot; complete

Mar 14, 2011 17:31

Title: When the Light Went Out
Author: anonpersona
Universe/Series: Reboot
Rating: PG13
Relationship Status: established 
Accumulated Word Count: 1,432
Genre: Drama, H/C, Romance, Friendship
Tropes: character study, friendship,
Warnings: main character death
Additional Pairings: none
Summary: Prompted on kink meme. Written for a prompt I lost the link to, ( Read more... )

star trek, st kink meme, when the light went out, fanfic, kirk/spock

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romanse1 March 14 2011, 22:26:04 UTC
Oh that was so sad! I thought the expressions of grief were spot-on for the characters and you communicated the pain of their loss clearly.

How ironic that Jim would go out the way his father did, yet so believable that he would do it too!

Two very small things: (1) if you get a chance you might want to correct McCoy's name, (2) You made a point of writing that everybody attended the funeral but you also made a point that McCoy refused to go.

Otherwise, perfect, heartfelt writing.

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anonpersona March 15 2011, 01:54:32 UTC
Thanks so much! >_< Aw man, I can't believe I missed the spelling of McCoy's name... lol, well, thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :-D

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karmic_fic March 15 2011, 03:08:41 UTC
love LOVE LOVE

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anonpersona March 15 2011, 16:00:12 UTC
Haha, thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :-)

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mazaher March 15 2011, 19:25:35 UTC
Appropriately kick-in-the-gut. Thank you!

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anonpersona March 16 2011, 15:53:22 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

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rae1013 March 16 2011, 00:52:46 UTC
This is beautiful. I hurt with Spock but it was Bones' section and his acknowledgment that no one would call him Bones again that made me cry. Lovely and so sad. <3

Edited for tired brain. =(

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anonpersona March 16 2011, 15:54:10 UTC
Aw, thanks so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :-D

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