Comments | anoradh: Fic: Deception (A Cinderella AU) (1/5) (Inception, Arthur/Eames, PG-13)

anoradh

Fic: Deception (A Cinderella AU) (1/5) (Inception, Arthur/Eames, PG-13)

Mar 24, 2012 23:51

Title: Deception (A Cinderella AU)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: High school AU
Warnings: Some strong language, unbetad
Word count: ~4500 (this part) / ~21000 (whole story)

Summary: A high school Cinderella AU, with Eames as the ugly duckling that transforms into a beautiful swan and Arthur as his well-dressed Prince Charming.

Disclaimer: The characters ( Read more... )

arthur/eames, inception, fanfic, au

Comments 12

gleditsia March 25 2012, 10:00:15 UTC

Oh, yay! It's lovely! Can't wait to read more! :)

anoradh March 25 2012, 11:50:08 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it!

black_betty_26 March 26 2012, 02:54:12 UTC

oh my gosh, the way you were talking about all the mistakes, and that english isn't your first language, etc. etc. I wasn't sure what I was getting myself into, reading this, but you write BEAUTIFULLY!! Seriously, you are selling yourself short!! I absolutely love this! Granted, modernized fairy tales are my ultimate weakness, but still--this one surpasses all my expectations---on to read the next part!!!!!

anoradh March 26 2012, 11:12:09 UTC

Thank you so much! You're too kind and I'm so glad you like it! It's always frustrating for me to write in English, because I can't seem to get the language to flow as naturally as it would if I were writing in my own native tongue. I guess it's a matter of confidence, which I admittedly lack. I'm just glad you decided to read it despite my warnings and that it didn't disappoint. Maybe I should edit my A/N and let people form their own impressions. :-) Anyway, I hope you'll like the rest of the story as well!