1st Chapter of Fishtailing

Feb 20, 2012 00:28



Two frames were curled together on the small berth; their plating pinged and popped as they cooled from their earlier activities. A soft blue glow slowly dimed and flickered off as one fell into recharge, curling closer to the other.

The other was content to stay awake, his servo slowly stroking his berthmate’s back. His red optics took in the ( Read more... )

fishtailing, fanfic, prowl, bunny farm, jazz, g1

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wicked3659 February 20 2012, 18:28:47 UTC
Very nice start :3 looking forward to more.

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anothersquirrel February 20 2012, 21:10:56 UTC
Thank you :)

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fianna9 February 21 2012, 03:18:43 UTC
Great set-up so far. I love that the twins aren't the record holders for speeding tickets. Really looking forward to more.

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anothersquirrel February 21 2012, 04:49:02 UTC
Thanks. The twins just figured that there were other ways to cause problems :)

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mmouse15 February 21 2012, 15:57:28 UTC
Nice start! I love the idea of the story, and I really like how you have Prime as the worst offender. What a nice little twist that was. Also, I love the teasing going on at the meeting.

I'm looking forward to more of this story!

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anothersquirrel February 22 2012, 07:34:23 UTC
Prime just.. forgets sometimes, and the meetings would otherwise be boring or really depressing without them teasing each other. Thanks

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