Back with Fishtailing

May 06, 2012 21:04

Title: Fishtailing (4/13)

Verse: G1 AU

Rating: PG-13/T

Characters: Prowl, Jazz, ensemble

Warnings: none

Summary: Fishtailing: when the driver of the car loses control and the end swerves side to side; like their lives that, due to poor past decisions, spun out of control, and now they were just along for the ride.

Notes: This chapter was hard to write ( Read more... )

fishtailing, fanfic, prowl, jazz, g1

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kida_bridger May 7 2012, 05:06:13 UTC
Ooh i cant wait to see that race! I really like the depth and detail your putting into this story.

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anothersquirrel May 7 2012, 06:44:28 UTC
Jazz can't wait for that race either. Thank you.

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pjlover666 May 7 2012, 07:44:48 UTC
Ahhh! I'm so happy you updated! Yey! I LOVED the flashback! It was so exciting to read! The traditions are fascinating to read! I hope you update soon! ^^

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anothersquirrel May 8 2012, 03:57:13 UTC
I'm glad you liked the flashback so much :)

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fianna9 May 7 2012, 11:57:12 UTC
I love the comment about Sideswipe driving backwards; I can so see him doing that. Grapple definitely had it "in" for Prime with that comment. Very well done

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anothersquirrel May 8 2012, 04:00:14 UTC
Sideswipe just likes the attention it gets him, and driving backwards did help him just a little. And yes, Grapple totally did that on purpose to get at Prime. Thanks

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silberstreif May 7 2012, 15:02:10 UTC
Nice to see the new chapter. :) It's really interesting to read how important and diversified the racing was on Cybertron. It's its own whole subculture.
Love reading about "tourist traps". Doesn't every city have some?
~silber

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anothersquirrel May 8 2012, 04:08:38 UTC
I'm glad you find the racing subculture interesting, it's one of my favorite parts to write :)

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