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Oct 31, 2004 16:12

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sour_celery October 31 2004, 17:13:22 UTC

those are both really good... i love ur poetry, and im not just saying that.

anothr4go10face October 31 2004, 17:25:59 UTC

haha, thanks ry. which do you like better though???????????? that's kinda what I needed to know. much appreciation to you though.

sour_celery October 31 2004, 22:26:32 UTC

the second i think

darkxfaery October 31 2004, 22:25:21 UTC

I think I have read these before?

I definately like the second one better, because it flows better, your rhymes are more unpredictable, and it's all around a better poem.

anothr4go10face November 1 2004, 16:54:58 UTC

thanks, I'll enter that one. :D

ocurlyhead November 1 2004, 11:58:02 UTC

the first poem is petty common crow compared to the glorious saring eagle of the second
boom
theres an analogy for you

no but really the second one is much better, better flow better rhyme but im intrigued at the message...
is that a past poem or a recent one?

anothr4go10face November 1 2004, 16:53:35 UTC

past. I wrote it a month ago.
thanks though, that's about what I was hoping to hear.

ocurlyhead November 1 2004, 17:12:54 UTC

of course