Why Wait

Feb 05, 2010 02:03

Title: Why Wait (oneshot)
Author: anoukinparis
Pairing: Yunjae
Genre: Angst/Romance
Rating: PG
Summary: What do you want me to leave you? A kiss? Fine, I’ll do that. I’ll kiss you until my lips hurt and you grow tired of me or start to regret it or both. I’ll kiss your cheek and nothing else if that’s better. I’ll kiss anywhere you want me to.

A/N: Yunho ( Read more... )

anoukinparis, yunjae, oneshot, romance, angst

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jesusluvsjaeho February 5 2010, 08:12:30 UTC
well. damn. damn.

i can't find the words for this. just...damn.

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anoukinparis February 5 2010, 08:18:08 UTC
x) i hope a good kind of damn, then ♥

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jesusluvsjaeho February 5 2010, 08:25:51 UTC
tis a very good damn.

the painful beauty of this just...defies my vocabulary.

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pabogateunfish February 5 2010, 08:44:41 UTC
the raw angst of this piece gets to me. the missed opportunities, the wanting but not doing, the needing but not getting.

the ending sentence speaks volumes. i can't tell you how much that one sentence hurts. god. enough to break my otp-heart.

;_;

you're a good writer, always have been and always will be. ♥

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anoukinparis February 23 2010, 22:56:38 UTC
oh bb i'd never want to break your otp-heart! ;___; but this was definitely bittersweet to write, and i can understand what you mean.

and jskhajhshash that seriously means so much to me. you're way too kind ♥

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alreem8 February 5 2010, 10:24:25 UTC
I red this piece while listening to "Kim Ryeowook - I Still Don't Know" and my heart throbbed painfully...
beautiful writing I love your one shots the most...

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lovelykitten8 February 5 2010, 15:31:00 UTC
i don't know what to say :(

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dreamerswings42 February 6 2010, 00:07:02 UTC
I like angsty stories. And I LIKE this one. Tears are streaming, I could feel it all like I was there.

That was so perfectly written, so raw, feelings like an open wound.

You did a wonderful job! Thanks for sharing your amazing talent!

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