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Here is the short story that I used for my final in creative writing. Give me some comments and criticism please.
( Submitted for the Approval of the Midnight Society... )
( Submitted for the Approval of the Midnight Society... )
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Uhm, I'm not so good with the criticism anymore. But if I tell you that I didn't quite connect, you're gonna wanna know why...
Maybe it's a defect in me, 'cos everyone else seems to be rather impressed.
Let's see what the others say, shall we? Then I'll pop in again with something real to say.
You're a writer, Steve.
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i had to read it twice before i fully understood, but well done. i still don't like your title, but if that's the only thing i can think of to criticize you're probably in good shape. i've said it before, i like your writing because it makes me think. yay steve!
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