Déjame Dormir

[anselmo_b]

Déjame Dormir

A mí el no dormir me desbarata
Me paso el día entero sin vivir
El sueño que me robas tú, me mata

La noche en vela es la más ingrata
Sabes que así me vas a destruir
A mí el no dormir me desbarata

Te pasas la noche dándome lata
No debo a tus encantos sucumbir
El sueño que me robas tú, me mata

Tu amor me está acabando -insensata!
Me tiene la cabeza

Comments

[jackfirecat]

I listen and maybe I hear
With google's aid
Some echo of where you are

I read the Spanish by ear
- it sits there side by side
I listen and maybe I hear

Some parts are clear;
The way it is made,
Some echo of where you are

And enjoyment is near
- morning broke as piñata - bravo! well played!
I listen and maybe I hear
Some echo of where you are

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- & oh dear - sorry to hear - hope you have found some sleep/will do soon

[anselmo_b]

It's my first villanelle, I'd been wanting to write one for ages. Tnanks for commenting.