aaahhh...good ending. is there a middle or a start? i suggest something along the lines of religious thriller. you know all them peoples go gaga over dem Dan Brown things nowadays.
i threw a ring in a body of water. haha! how dramatic am i?
nice piece ant!
i really like this line: The lights in my room bounced off the cd everytime I examined it. It used to be shiny and new, but now, it was covered in dust, fingerprints, and scratches.
those pictures are sooo pretty. i want your camera!! sorry i wasn't able to meet up with you this morning, i had to get some work done and if i went to starbucks i probably wouldn't have done it, so, i'll make it up to you. buy you breakfast on wednesday!
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it's fiction. haha.
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oh dear lord. dan brown.
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damn i want to break someone's gift that dramatically.
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break? what do you mean?
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how dramatic am i?
nice piece ant!
i really like this line:
The lights in my room bounced off the cd everytime I examined it. It used to be shiny and new, but now, it was covered in dust, fingerprints, and scratches.
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you know i don't really write fiction. it took me quite awhile to come up with this.
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sorry i wasn't able to meet up with you this morning, i had to get some work done and if i went to starbucks i probably wouldn't have done it, so, i'll make it up to you. buy you breakfast on wednesday!
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ok you have to buy me a mcdonalds big breakfast on wednesday! hoorah!
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